Reviews for The Things He Didn't Know

LoveRehab 2008-06-27 ch 1,	abuseThis poem reminds me of a slam style poem. It's different. I like that you separated each part with a line.
Mousey-Boi 2007-01-26 ch 1,	abuseNeat. First off, I love the format you choose. It turns what might have been a too-normal (sadly) experience into something original and unique and really helps move the poem along. Likewise, I love how you started each stanza with 'Betcha', it seems to show a nonchalance about the whole situation that he didn't drive you to use more formal wording, and it makes the poem more real. The only thing I really don't like much about the poem is the subject matter :) But that's more personal preference, my relationship breakups are just usually fueled with a lot more emotional drama that this poem portrays. You only felt 'a touch of sorrow', which is good thing considering he was an arrogant cheater. So don't listen to flamers who only want attention! ^^ This was a good bit of poetry.
FUCK ME ARSE 2007-01-26 ch 1,	abusedude, this sucks.