I know that feeling. Simple and effective. Nice work.

If Only I had known about this yesterday...
then I would've been able to congratulate you on the phone :3

I really lke this very much...
I think it deep (of meaning)
without it sounding too, hm... heavy?

In other words,
I LOVE this one (big smile)

Ohh, so quiet and. I like it a lot because I can completely relate and it brings tears to my eyes. It's shortness really adds to the emotion. Keep writing!

~Anna~ :)