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| xDancingintheRainx 2007-02-04 ch 1,   | I really like this. The flow is great and the rhymes don't sound forced at all. Great job! Thanks for the review by the way :) |
| StrongHold 2007-02-03 ch 1, | I think this is beautiful. The second line confuses me a bit... but other than that, great. I think the title's very interesting and it left me as a reader guessing what you really mean by Forgotten. |
| Elizabeth Bilberry 2007-01-27 ch 1, | "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." - Oscar Wilde The emotions in this are breathtaking and remind me a lot of that quote. Take care. EB |
| naughty-gal 2007-01-26 ch 1, | i like it its short simple and the message is straight forward |