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poetic abortion
2007-01-30
ch 1,
Oh.

OH.

This whole thing--from summary to the very last line--is pure perfection.

I just adore the flow, the style, the set-up. Everything.

It's amazing.

- Noelle
no.peace.los.angeles
2007-01-28
ch 1,
This is great. I love some of the imagery, like with "marble eyes tear holes in veins" to start out the piece. Very striking and unique. You've done a great job of writing a scene. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
lackluster
2007-01-28
ch 1,
the last line breaks my heart. it's very well done, how it flows and the imagery and everything. how can i not love it.
perdita's kiss
2007-01-26
ch 1,
as far as i know, i read this FIRST! hahaha, m'love, i missed you like **. or hell. or wow. whatever. this is gorgeousness.
a lonely september
2007-01-26
ch 1,
god this was incredible. just the feeling this poem had to it was stunning you did such a wonderful job with it. lovely. never stop.
in a jar pk
2007-01-26
ch 1,
impressive; the last line wraps it all up beautifully. x
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