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| poetic abortion 2007-01-30 ch 1, | Oh. OH. This whole thing--from summary to the very last line--is pure perfection. I just adore the flow, the style, the set-up. Everything. It's amazing. - Noelle |
| no.peace.los.angeles 2007-01-28 ch 1, | This is great. I love some of the imagery, like with "marble eyes tear holes in veins" to start out the piece. Very striking and unique. You've done a great job of writing a scene. Nice work. Keep writing! :) |
| lackluster 2007-01-28 ch 1, | the last line breaks my heart. it's very well done, how it flows and the imagery and everything. how can i not love it. |
| perdita's kiss 2007-01-26 ch 1, | as far as i know, i read this FIRST! hahaha, m'love, i missed you like **. or hell. or wow. whatever. this is gorgeousness. |
| a lonely september 2007-01-26 ch 1, | god this was incredible. just the feeling this poem had to it was stunning you did such a wonderful job with it. lovely. never stop. |
| in a jar pk 2007-01-26 ch 1, | impressive; the last line wraps it all up beautifully. x |