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| Jayjack 2008-08-12 ch 1,   | aw. that was cute yet sad. so very sad. :'( i feel so bad. aw |
| Dani P 2007-03-07 ch 1, | good work with this. specially by choosing such a nice song. also you made the song work with the story the dance setting is perfect for this and you described the scene pretty well, perhaps you could add more but this is fine. if you want above and beyond id consider adding more details. nice twist. sad but nice. kinda a reminders be of the phrase "too good to be true" |
| Dancer for Life 2007-01-28 ch 1, | I'm not going to lie... sometimes those things where people mix song lyrics with a story annoy me... sometimes they butcher the song... but occasionally, they give it a whole new meaning.. Fortunatly you were one of the latter! I liked this one, expecially the twist at the end... I could understand the shock, but then I was like, Woah! Good work... |
| Wolf's Night 2007-01-26 ch 1, | Oh thats kinda sad. I liked how it went along with the lyrics though, good song. It was a nice story, keep writing. ~BloodHorse |