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| tim rollins 2007-04-01 ch 1,  | this is very cute. i absolutely love it. i feel ya' so cute "back to reality" i LOVE it! |
| simpleplan13 2007-02-27 ch 1,  | I like that last line... it was so sweet... |
| sunshineofyourlife 2007-02-03 ch 1, | Wow. indescribable feeling generated from that one. indescribable. -Zuri/Sunshine |
| lackluster 2007-01-28 ch 1, | witty. i love it. |
| Lowell Boston 2007-01-26 ch 1, | Well done. I like the real and surreal quality of this piece, especially theway you use it effectivly at the ending. Great job. Thanks for posting. |