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Reviews For: Perfection's Shadow

Kannibal Klehmenteen.
2007-01-26
ch 1,
Wow.
This is spectacular.

I definitely understand where you're coming from, only kinda in reverse...
My sister is the bad kid and I can never be bad enough for her and even when I get better grades then her, I get punished for longer.

Being younger sucks.
Dollface Dead
2007-01-26
ch 1,
This is great. I like this part:

always half a step behind
and forever underneath.

Keep writing.
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