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Sirivinda 2008-07-14 ch 9,	I really loved this story! At times, I found myself wishing there was more of it, more detail, more depth to the events, but then I think that's just greed on my part. The story is definitely speeding forward, but I think it works. I also like how Cal is this promiscuous bastard, but one still cheers for him, you know? He could easily have been nothing but a shallow creep, but you manage to keep him the hero. And Sidereus is a brilliant side-kick to all this. I think the transition from Cal the emotionally retarded ** to the love-sick careful boyfriend to the prince works. I've tried hard to think of something constructive to say. I guess I never really got that Cal had been around for centuries until he told Cerasus, but whether that's something you left out or something that I just missed when I read it, I don't know. And at any rate, I don't really feel that it necessarily affects one's enjoying the story. Over all, this was one of the most enjoyable reads for a long time, so thanks for posting. :)
tmelange1 2008-06-04 ch 9,	Bravo on completing a wonderful story! Your story was professionally executed, had tons of humor and interesting characters and a core relationship to root for. Of course, I can't help but feel that Cal made out like a bandit in this, not suffering at all for the many immoral things that he's done (including leaving three sisters unwed and pregnant in a re-enactment of the same wrong that has colored his whole life). There's something...unjust about Cal never getting his comeuppance, even though I do appreciate a happy ending. But! I did want the prince to be happy in the end, and if that means that Cal never has to pay the piper - well, a little bit of unreality does make for a great story with a feel-good ending. :)) Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
tmelange1 2008-06-04 ch 7,	I love all your characters! Especially Cal! I'm waiting for the show to drop on him, though. LOL Bravo!
tmelange1 2008-06-04 ch 6,	Yeesh, Cal is in a delicate situation. It's not that easy to change your wicked ways... LOL Bravo! Great continuation!
tmelange1 2008-06-04 ch 5,	This story is hysterical, and the developing relationship between Cal and Cera is so sweet. Bravo!
tmelange1 2008-06-04 ch 4,	This story is marvelous! I wasn't exactly sure where you were going with Cal's man -** behavior but if he falls in love with the prince I think I will dance a jig. LOL Serves him right to be the one on the receiving end for a change. :)) Plus I can't help thinking that the Queen has some sort of plan in all of this. LOL I love this story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing!
Evelei 2008-04-10 ch 9,	Beautifully Written, very, very original story in my opinion. Hard to come by these days. Hope you don't mind me adding it to my new C2? If so, drop me a line and I'll removes it. Again... Very well done.
Amandine 2008-03-24 ch 9,	wow that was great! totally one of my favourite story on FP. you had it all perfect:real characters,good narrative style,humour (the cal and sid moments were hilarious) and the cute and believable romance. don't know why this story don't have more feedbacks. i suck at english writing so i can't really express how highly i think of your story. thank you for sharing this fic :-)
Sasquatch 2008-03-18 ch 9,	awesome even though i wanted to slap the queen every time she thought or talked >.>;
Qui 2008-02-18 ch 9,	Oh my goodness! that was like the best story ever. No really. I'd be creativly constructive, but I really don't think it could ever be improved upon, you are just that amazing. I loved it (as though you couldn't tell). Qui
Rachizzle 2008-01-18 ch 9,	This story was absolutely amazing. I really enjoyed it, and I couldn't stop reading it even when I knew I should be in bed. I'm so glad I found it!
debzzz 2008-01-18 ch 9,	This was fantastic!!Absolutely amazing!!I love your writing style so much!!It was a wonderful story and I'm positive that Sid is one of the most amazing characters-ever!!Great work!
dolly-dear 2007-06-25 ch 9,	Lovely. Absolutely lovely. It is now past 11, and I'm about to fall asleep on the keyboard, but I made myself stay awake to finish this. This is a wonderful story, and you are a wonderful author. I love all the characters, especially Sidereus. I would like to rip out the Queen's hair, though.. The ending was definitly my favorite part. I can't tell you how tired I am of the sad endings that I read all the time, and a happy ending is certainly refreshing. Once again, I love this. Nothing whatsoever but praise! [I apologize for the long review.]
paputsza 2007-05-20 ch 1,	lies! this is so my life story -.o do you believe in magic, lalalalala
atadobsessive5345 2007-05-17 ch 9,	That was an enjoyable story, and I like how you ended it, not with something that tied up all loose ends, but something that let people continue to wonder while fulfilling most of their curiosity. Good job.

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