Reviews for Towards the Mailbox

Reviews For: Towards the Mailbox

inflatabletigers 2007-02-15 ch 1, anon.	abuse:) Good. You do a wonderful job of... making your characters, I guess. I like it. Definitely not the same as the Katie Bell I'm used to, but I like it.
LadyPup 2007-01-29 ch 1,	abuseI don't have to leave a annonomys review: I have the same name here. Makes life a bit easier. On to the review: I liked it. It had a very detached, contimplative feel to it, very much like the character you created. It's a fun peice to read, especially for those of us who like to take a step back and examine the world. It seems like it'd be fun to write too. You get to put in so much more description then most writes ever get away with. And as I've said before, you have a very good sense of how to write descriptive scenes. You kow what to put in so that I get the feel of the place, but not so much that I get bored. My compliments. On the critical side, you're introduction is a bit confusing and I got a little lost trying to understand it. I thought you were describing a one-dymentional character from the statement, "this was the girl that you certainly knew." You messed with my head by waiting until the end to say she was the girl you THOUGHT you knew. I sort of see where you're going, but I think you might want to streighten it out a bit. I'm not one to read into stories very much, or to think all that deaply about them. What's really amazing is that the snow-marring metaphore almost got through my thick skull. I can tell that if I want to take the time to figure it out, it would make sense and actually be insitefull. That's the way it should be. Not slapping me upside the head with symbolism, but still making it obvious enough that I want to figure it out. Not that I will, of course, cuz I'm lazy. You know that pretty well by now. There. I reviewed. Now you have to promise that if I ever get any of mine up, (which I pr'oly won't) you'll do the same for me.
phantom of a fragrance 2007-01-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseYAY! I come from as a faithful reviewer! Very nice story, I liked your character! Quite descriptive, but not to the point where it rambles on, so thats awesome. Good writing!
Moon River x3 2007-01-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseJust wandered over here from your fanfiction account (pretty amazing to read something other than fanfic) and i think that this is awesome. not much else i can say really. :)
Arre 2007-01-28 ch 1,	abuseyou really lo, you know that plagierisiing this of my poor friend. its word for word too. and you stole her pen name... oh sorry its you... haha. kidding i knew it was you. read you thing in m.m.and m. on ff.n i should really actually post something to this site eh? ah well. it happens well then. as i mentioned before i loved this. cheers jorgeous
FoxTail13 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abuseHey, Giddy, it's NickyFox13 from Omg, you've got a fictionpress account, I'm so proud of you, lol. Anyways, this is REALLY good, I personally like it alot. Keep up the awesomely great work!
ashli-may.x 2007-01-26 ch 1,	abusewow. this is amazing. i really, really liked it. at first, i'll admit it was a bit of a shock to see anything un-FFn related, but once i got used to it, i loved it. you have such a descriptive way with words that i suppose we on FFn just take for granted, our own imaginations having our own version of the same thing anyway.. but yeah, i loved it. I liked how Riley wrote little things on bits of paper and tucked them away in her shoebox.. i do things like that, lol. I write all over the covers and back pages of my school books and either copy the half-decent stuff into my notebook or tear the pages out and staple them in. not that you really needed to know that or anything.. sorry for getting carried away there, lol. Anyway, I loved it. you're brilliant. i love you. Ash x
FUCK ME ARSE 2007-01-26 ch 1,	abusePLZ 4 TO RED MY WURK, UR TEH SKILS OF ART

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