Reviews for Background Bitchings

the Berserker 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abuseOh... this is sad. So, of course, I utterly adore it. This is a really touching piece of poetry. It's definately being added to my favourites. :) I've been looking for good poetry writers to critique my work. Could you do that for me? Flames are totally appreciated. I'm sorry if this poem is really true, but it's fantastic. I'm looking forward to more of your work.
SapphireIris 2007-01-26 ch 1,	abuseOoh... angsty. The only error I see is a relatively small one, "one's" instead of "ones." And that's all for the errors. And this poem is very aptly named! I try to avoid the types of people described. I don't usually go for poems, but this is cool, if a bit depressing. -SapphireIris