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FusionGig 2009-08-07 . chapter 3
Oh I like it. Please continue!
fairies and snapple 2009-05-24 . chapter 3
This is so funny, and your style of writing is just totally great. I hope you choose to continue it.
Twelfth Night 2009-04-12 . chapter 1
Please update. This story is awesome.
TheLadyPendragon 2009-03-07 . chapter 3
This is so amusing. I like Rudy. He kind of reminds me of myself. Though I don't actually care if I become valedictorian, as long as I'm, like, in the top ten or something. I *do* hate my school's current valedictorian, though. xD But he, meaning Rudy, is just so refreshingly honest. Well, we *are* reading his thoughts, and I hope most people are honest with themselves, but it's still amusing. I guess Meka's curse is just to gradually make his life suck, huh? What's his deal? I mean, I get the whole competition thing, but cursing someone? I'm assuming he really *can* since the genre is supernatural. I wouldn't ruin someone's life over something like that, especially if I was actually in the lead. xD Does he have a crush on Rudy or something? Is that the pairing? Because "stiff-shirts" kind of scares me. xD Anyway, how long until this is off hiatus? I like amusment, you know? I get if you're busy, though, but just so you know, I am still reading. xD
Random 2009-01-29 . chapter 3
I love the flow of your words and characters. After reading this three chapters, I decided that I would like to read other fictions written by you. I am impressed, very impressed by your work. I have not read your other story, Jeeves, but I am quite startled by the statements you made in your profile. It's sad that you wanted to remove your stories, but it is your choice. I do not think it is poorly written. If that is your poor, I would want to know what's your best. Cause to me, this is wonderfully written. I do wish to see more stories and chapters from you.
oo 2008-12-23 . chapter 1
one of my favorites.
happy holidays and update.
Tinyyellowboxes 2008-09-03 . chapter 3
0_0 NEW YEAR'S EVE! Ah! No! This story was amazing! How could you stop it! Please, please keep writing. I'll cry if you don't.
Tinyyellowboxes 2008-09-03 . chapter 1
0_0 VERY amazing writing style!
Kiviquespel 2008-07-16 . chapter 2
Okay okay okay, I read the first chapter of this story and I'm going 'omfg, omfg' and I get all excited when I notice you have more chapters and I'm grinning and I'm reading and my mind is swearing up an awesomeness overload from this story. I usually wait till the end to review, but I'm sorry - I just can't this time. Well, I could wait, but I swear to god my heart would explode first. I gotta expel some of the hyperness in my mind!!
Okay, so - first of all, Not only is this story line just brilliance, but - what overwhelmed me and caught my vivid attention the most, is your dialog! I mean, my goodness, I thought I was okay with dialog, but my characters are NEVER talking again!! Its so perfect and so real and I'm so in awe of you and I'll be your slave 'cause you're my writing GOD/goddess (Whatever) now!! :D
the Berserker 2008-05-11 . chapter 3
gosh, there are some major love-vibes i'm radiating right now after reading this. you are so awesome =]
CrayonMentality 2008-04-05 . chapter 3
Aw, Rudy has to end up with Seth!

*wails*

Although I admit, it seems kinda unlikely that he would do that but oh well. :P
firedraygon97 2008-04-01 . chapter 3
Very interesting concept! Haha, I'm very amused by the curse. And I'm still curious as to who the ultimate potential love-interest is going to be for Rudy. Please do write more soon!

~fd97
Sasquatch 2008-03-24 . chapter 3
This story rocks my socks~ =^ ^=
kaidreil 2008-03-10 . chapter 3
aha, another fine, witty story from you :D
...that might have sounded mildly creepy, because i dont think ive actually reviewed jeeves =/ but that ones aweome too, and got there through a friend. yeah :D
i really like the way you go about developing people's characters; it so natural and realistic, the sequence of thoughts and stuff. I mean, a lot of writers try and get the eye-catchnig things in right off the bat but no one really thinks "hoshanp im gay" all the time. So points! wo!
and sarcastic humour makes me smile on the inside
cookiestalker 2008-03-09 . chapter 3
this is funny! I'm really curious to know if the curse is real or not and if he likes Rudy...UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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