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Tinyyellowboxes
2008-09-03
ch 3,
abuse0_0 NEW YEAR'S EVE! Ah! No! This story was amazing! How could you stop it! Please, please keep writing. I'll cry if you don't.
Tinyyellowboxes
2008-09-03
ch 1,
abuse0_0 VERY amazing writing style!
Kiviquespel
2008-07-16
ch 2,
abuseOkay okay okay, I read the first chapter of this story and I'm going 'omfg, omfg' and I get all excited when I notice you have more chapters and I'm grinning and I'm reading and my mind is swearing up an awesomeness overload from this story. I usually wait till the end to review, but I'm sorry - I just can't this time. Well, I could wait, but I swear to god my heart would explode first. I gotta expel some of the hyperness in my mind!!
Okay, so - first of all, Not only is this story line just brilliance, but - what overwhelmed me and caught my vivid attention the most, is your dialog! I mean, my goodness, I thought I was okay with dialog, but my characters are NEVER talking again!! Its so perfect and so real and I'm so in awe of you and I'll be your slave 'cause you're my writing GOD/goddess (Whatever) now!! :D
the Berserker
2008-05-11
ch 3,
abusegosh, there are some major love-vibes i'm radiating right now after reading this. you are so awesome =]
CrayonMentality
2008-04-05
ch 3,
abuseAw, Rudy has to end up with Seth!

*wails*

Although I admit, it seems kinda unlikely that he would do that but oh well. :P
firedraygon97
2008-04-01
ch 3,
abuseVery interesting concept! Haha, I'm very amused by the curse. And I'm still curious as to who the ultimate potential love-interest is going to be for Rudy. Please do write more soon!

~fd97
Sasquatch
2008-03-24
ch 3,
abuseThis story rocks my socks~ =^ ^=
kaidreil
2008-03-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseaha, another fine, witty story from you :D
...that might have sounded mildly creepy, because i dont think ive actually reviewed jeeves =/ but that ones aweome too, and got there through a friend. yeah :D
i really like the way you go about developing people's characters; it so natural and realistic, the sequence of thoughts and stuff. I mean, a lot of writers try and get the eye-catchnig things in right off the bat but no one really thinks "hoshanp im gay" all the time. So points! wo!
and sarcastic humour makes me smile on the inside
etherealrain
2008-03-09
ch 3,
abusethis is funny! I'm really curious to know if the curse is real or not and if he likes Rudy...UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Tinkering
2008-03-09
ch 3,
abuseFucking hilarious! I love it, can't wait 'til you update!
Dawn-at-Midnight
2008-01-26
ch 3,
abuseThat sounds like a good New Years resolution...I never end up keeping mine, but I really hope you're better at that. Poor Rudy... It would really suck to have a dog piss all over your pants... but I think he should have picked out either the pink sweat pants (the ones that say 'hottie') or the red boxers to wear. Lol, and I loved the descriptions of Meka's beads! Remind me to do that to all my friends. ...And the idea of him singing to 'My Little Pony' and putting the beads in his hair was completely amazing... Great story, update soon, yes?

~Dawn
applecinnamon
2008-01-10
ch 3, anon.
abuseHappy New Years! Hope yours didn't suck.

*proceeds to wait eagerly for the next chapter*
Amindaya
2008-01-04
ch 3,
abuseI admit I had to go back and reread the other chapters because I didn't remember what happened. Like, at all.

But now I remember that I love this story. So yay. :)

I like all the horrible things that are happening to him. They're funny.
The Aquatic Chewbacca
2008-01-03
ch 3,
abusei adore this story. have i told you that? i probably have. and i would LOVE it if you finished it this year! it's one of my favorite fics on fictionpress! please, please continue updating! this story is hilarious, and i love Rudy! he's so funny :D i'm curious about Seth, too. i want to see more of him! though i really don't like Meka. bleh, he is so rude and mean and annoying! and wtf? beads in his hair? that is so weird.
so please please please UPDATE! i'll review every chapter (and preferrably give better reviews...this review sucks. sorry. i don't know what to write; this story dazzles me.)
so update, please! you're a brilliant writer, and this is definitely my favorite out of all your stories!
-kon
Asitha
2008-01-02
ch 3,
abuseI'm so loving this story, and I can't wait for more! It'll be really interesting to see what happens next ^_^
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