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| Mistress of the Tormented 2007-02-12 ch 3, | abuseHey! again loving the story. um ya didnt notice any mistakes or anything and its written quite beautifully. :) anywhoo... its 5:55am at the moment so i'll see you soon :D |
| Mistress of the Tormented 2007-02-10 ch 2, | abuseI'm flattered you used Mistress of the Tormented! :) i noticed one mistke though... well im not quite sure if you intended to write it but oh well, you wrote "the clothes that I had taken preciously" and i think what you mean is previously. other than that i really like where the story is going and i hope you bring David back soon. muah muah muah love it! |
| Ocean Frost 2007-02-04 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease continue writing this... It's really good... Keep this one going PLEASE! |
| Mistress of the Tormented 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI really cannot wait wait to read more |