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Reviews For: A Voice Of Reason

Mistress of the Tormented
2007-02-12
ch 3,
abuseHey! again loving the story. um ya didnt notice any mistakes or anything and its written quite beautifully. :) anywhoo... its 5:55am at the moment so i'll see you soon :D
Mistress of the Tormented
2007-02-10
ch 2,
abuseI'm flattered you used Mistress of the Tormented! :) i noticed one mistke though... well im not quite sure if you intended to write it but oh well, you wrote "the clothes that I had taken preciously" and i think what you mean is previously. other than that i really like where the story is going and i hope you bring David back soon. muah muah muah love it!
Ocean Frost
2007-02-04
ch 1, anon.
abusePlease continue writing this... It's really good... Keep this one going PLEASE!
Mistress of the Tormented
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseI really cannot wait wait to read more
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