See, i like this one better. You're happy for him instead of kind of 'taking for granted attitude'.
Nice. Nice.

I love the sense of revelation in this poem...I've been there. Thanks for writing this.

Beautifully written, I love the way you end the poem. I really like this a lot. Keep writing!

Isn't it awesome when God is so amazing like that? He tends to do some pretty amazing things. Don't ever forget that He's always there, especially when you're suffering.

Katie makes me smile too, especially when she talks about God. God makes me smile. :)

Emily is grinning.