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Rodwen Fefalas
2007-02-12
ch 1,
See, i like this one better. You're happy for him instead of kind of 'taking for granted attitude'.
Nice. Nice.
Amaryllis-lily
2007-01-27
ch 1,
I love the sense of revelation in this poem...I've been there. Thanks for writing this.
Guardrail
2007-01-27
ch 1,
Beautifully written, I love the way you end the poem. I really like this a lot. Keep writing!
shining defiance
2007-01-26
ch 1,
Isn't it awesome when God is so amazing like that? He tends to do some pretty amazing things. Don't ever forget that He's always there, especially when you're suffering.

Katie makes me smile too, especially when she talks about God. God makes me smile. :)

Emily is grinning.
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