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| Inkhearts and Inkstains 2007-11-07 ch 1, | really powerfuly written, very moving |
| Angelic Darkness 2007-01-31 ch 1, | Wow. This is really awesome! Really loved it. I kinda felt everything click into place with my life, but in my case I wasn't raped, I'm just being controled by a "best friend". Still, you feel like you should pretend everything's alright. Aboslutly loved it! |
| penguinluver19 2007-01-29 ch 1, | I thought you had an excellent piece here. You really added emotion into it, and I really like how you were able to express what you wanted to say in a short piece. It made for easy reading. Ending was short, but like I said it was easy to read and it flowed nicely. Good Job! |
| HelloGirl 2007-01-28 ch 1, | Oh, Nicky! Absolutly fantastic! I LOVED THIS! Congrats on a wonderful masterpiece! Every sentance was correct and none were fillers and pointless. Each, a correct piece of the story. I loved this alot. Wonderful job. You cpature the emotions well. Wonderful. Karina~*~ |
| passive.soul 2007-01-26 ch 1, | "This is your one and only time to vent" This made me think. It seems to need more of an ending though (just a suggestion), I can feel the anger coming through this, the fear is more fitting, to stop and think about everything that could possibly have gone wrong for someone to do all this isn't difficult, although it is uncomfortable. Hmm... this didn't help you at all I know. But I did read it, and I found it good just so you know. |