i loved the last line of this.

watch out for spelling errors where "to" should be "too"

don't worry i always miss my own spelling errors as well.

the way i can tell that it's true emotion and not fictional poetry, is because of the way you wrote it. i can tell by the structure. it's as if only you can fully understand what it means.

from what i understand i relate. it's strange how people say you can't fall in love if you're too young. but there really is no age to love. it's more that when you're young, you too naiive to understand what comes from loving someone. i've learned that, and it's a very complicated situation.

good job, i hope you write more soon.

Im going through the EXACT same thing. I completely feel for you. Keep writing!
--Shookie Smiles Sweetly