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Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-06 ch 2,	well, you certainly achieved unpredictibility for your characters in this chapter. they don't seem to have a strong flow yet. thanks for posting. are you going to update this story?
Katherine-the-greate 2008-01-06 ch 1,	this chapter wasn't pop out wonderful, but in it you explained very well the setting and the background history. what was she doing that really made her late?
Savvy0X 2007-12-16 ch 4,	Yay! I love this story! I've been looking for some good werewolf ones. I'm just sick of all of the vampire stories, and I just want a well-written werewolf story. I anticipate the next chapter!
Fic-Fan-CC27 2007-08-09 ch 4,	yay! you updated! lol i love this man. i've been having ideas like this for a long time, but i never got the chance to put them down on something solid. keep going, please! thanks for what there is as well!
bansira 2007-07-16 ch 4,	Hm... interesting. It's kind of obvious that one of the wolves was Embry, trying to protect Naomi. What left me curious now, is why he told her to stay away from him. my paranoya-streaked brain tells me it's because Embry's already on the bad side of the pack and if they think he told Naomi anything they'll kill her... or something! xD Oww... don't worry if you take long for updates, readers don't go away... especially not if there are werewolves and pretty mountains/cliffs!
bansira 2007-07-16 ch 3,	Wow, nice cliffhanger (pun unintended)! Right now i bet she won't make it home in 10 minutes... not when a "furry monster" wants to eat her! xD; I think it's a nice change to see that dead animals are appearing and not dead people. The problem with dead people is that police makes investigations, with animals they don't care and, in the end, if you want to solve it, you're all on your own! I like (love?) it so far!
Fic-Fan-CC27 2007-07-14 ch 3,	wah... it's July 14! what happened? lol nasty werewolf! bad werewolf! leave naomi alone! EMBRY!!
Fic-Fan-CC27 2007-07-14 ch 2,	I like Embry. He's kinda what i was expecting for a werewolf boy. The wild type. Yeah. i'm starting to like this. Embry may just be my new boyfriend! XD
Fic-Fan-CC27 2007-07-14 ch 1,	Yeah... this chappie has been on here for SO long now, but i was just wondering around and i found this. You're thinking of publishing this story? sounds like a good one. Not many werewolf stories out there. But, this chapter seems too short for a young adult book. maybe... adding a little more detail? trust me, i tried making a werewolf story, and my brother says that 32 pages isn't going to cut it. XD please host the whole story here! i need something to read that'll last the summer!
Exploding Gun Exploding Hea... 2007-06-14 ch 3,	Wow it's so good! Update soon!
ham337dd 2007-05-28 ch 3,	Thanks for the new chapter! I like chapter 2, but I think it’s weaker than chapter 1. Try to be more focused on the story you’re telling, on what you want the reader to think or feel. Chapter 2 has a lot of odd/ unnecessary phrases that distract the reader from the story. Besides that, I want to say I’m excited about learning more about Naomi in the next chapter. I love complicated characters.
Naru'sXGrlXUchihaXSyrii 2007-05-25 ch 1,	really good story! im a fan of the lycan myself
The Jade Tipster 2007-05-14 ch 1,	This is cool. Naomi makes me laugh. I'm not entirely sure that bullying an ex-druggie is the best course of action...
Mojojuju 2007-05-14 ch 1,	Ah. Interesting beginning. :] I like how you keep the story in a mysterious atmosphere. Very good. Waiting forward for an update and this goes to my favourites. :] You can feel special now. :] -- J.
xx 3DD Fan 2007-05-13 ch 1,	Very nice! I like it! The only thing I'd say is in the beginning, you state that Naomi went to rehab numerous times. Try to cut down on that, because the reader doesn't need to be told more than once. lol Otherwise, good job!

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