Reviews for Fallacious Expectations

BellonaFlayreRiver 2007-01-30 ch 1,	abuse"im changed for the worse, so what did you achieve". great line. they rhymes worked very well. lovely.
Symphany is lyrical bliss 2007-01-30 ch 1,	abuseThis has a good message about how people try to change how you are, but inside you know that you're not that person society has changed you to be. very good.
suthing 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abuseThe poem is catchy, and I like the line : Hold my head under and teach me to drown. :).
Princess-anna57 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abuseWell written. I like it a lot. Write on. ~Anna~ ^_^