Not bad really. It makes me really glad that I have a yard were I can feel the earth under my feet. Good job!

really cool poem. not much else to say here, but that i liked it and it is awesome. nice work. i applaud you. *clapps*

wow, i love how it sounds a bit sad and the way you have put across the longing for flowers...

i have a poem with a related theme...its entitled "we used to run in the fields"...

truly yours...

Wow, powerful work. I heart this poem! Awesome! ^_^ Write on!

~Anna~ ^_^