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| nuttx 2008-01-10 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a general review, because I've been going through most of your fiction on fp.c, and I'm really quite impressed. You're an amazing author, with a very strong yet subtle style, huggable characters, original and somewhat dramatic plotlines, and a good grasp of the English language. I think I might be falling in love. x) Am enjoying your work, and would be ecstatic to see more of it. Much love, crimson. |
| kloun mannequin 2007-04-13 ch 1, | abuseto be honest, I just liked the first paragraph, it was very poetic. |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-02-26 ch 3, | abuseYeah, no problem. I like this one too, just because I'm usually the friend who wants to know what's going on with everyone, so I can help, and it drives me crazy when friends won't open up. I think there are plenty of people like that, so the character of Jenni feels realistic as well. Even if you haven't managed how your friends feel exactly, you have stumbled upon something that I think most people could relate to, which is always fantastic. |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-02-26 ch 6, | abuseAww. Matt needs to be kidnapped and taken somewhere fun, or something. *sigh* I want this to have a happy ending, unlikely as it seems. |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-02-26 ch 2, | abuseWow. I just had to comment on this one as well. You're very good at making the characters seem to have their own voice, and now seem contrived and artificial. I especially loved the sound of this: In the cemetery gates I found it, In the concrete graves I shaped it, In the sunlight I showed it. I guess the smile doesn’t fit in the sun, does it? Amazing writing. Well done. |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseOkay, right away, I love this first one. Partially because of the tone, it doesn't feel lame and cliche, it feels very..real, very much like a person speaking, like there's a real relationship (not that kind, I know, but a connection between the characters) and that's great. And maybe also because it reminds me of my friend Andrew.. why must parents be awful to our awesome gay friends? lol. |
| Isis ShadowWolf 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseYour use of repetition was PERFECT! I love this poem! Wonderful job. |