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| Kyra Lachlan 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abusehm...iinteresting |
| Kaybug150 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI love the way you've written this first chapter. It's so. . . Romantic, I guess is the only way I can think to describe it. Great job. |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-02-26 ch 4, | abuseWell, if this is a mood, it feels...dreamy, almost surreal. I love the description of the girl most of all, for some reason. Nicely done, once again. |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-02-26 ch 2, | abuseHm. This is really interesting. Makes you think about wavering between loving someone and absolutely hating them, and what can make you decide to live. I feel like love and hate are really parallels, and indifference is the true opposite of love. So maybe that's why it's so easy to switch between love and hate, or have them co-exist. And maybe I think too much. :D |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-02-26 ch 1, | abuseAbout time I read this, I've been meaning to for ages. And I'm glad I did; this is a really strange, fascinating world you've written, I have to read more. :) |