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| marianne 2007-09-23 ch 1,  | This is nice..but I feel that Philippe's Frenglish is a bit distracting. It's said that Richard himself barely spoke English, being more comfortable in French, so shouldn't both Richard and Philippe speak normally in the world of your fiction? Richard's characterization is quite good. A dear, mercurial, affectionate fellow. But I can't like Philippe. |