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| Jesse the Storyteller 2008-04-19 ch 1,  | abuseI like how you describe the conflict in this. It's interesting, since I've never really thought about this side of the relationship before. I like the line "The mourning for the dead of Mary the kind sister had actually started five years ago and today is for it to end." Mostly because I can understand mourning something that had really been gone a long time ago. Good emotions in this. It's not really a story, though... just kind of random thoughts put together. I like it, though. It made me think. :) -Jesse Attack of the Review Marathon! (Link in my profile :D) |
| KingAndrewI 2007-10-23 ch 1, | abuseIn the Tudor an Elizabethan eras, Mary I and Elizabeth I were refered to as "Queen Mary" and "Queen Elizabeth" without the roman numerals. |
| Music by Moonlight 2007-05-13 ch 1, | abuseVery beautifully and touchingly written. |
| Gold from the Stars 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseMary and Elizabeth's relationship is so interesting to me. Well done! |