Reviews for The One that Got Away

Faithless Juliet 2007-03-17 ch 1,	I like the honest heartrenching sense of this. It's truthful. You don't sugarize it. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet.
no.peace.los.angeles 2007-02-02 ch 1,	Interesting. I like how I can feel the bar setting just by reading this. Maybe it's because I've been put in this kind of situation a few times myself. Nice work. Keep writing! :)
SirScott 2007-01-29 ch 1,	I liked that poem. We can take our eyes off the prize sometimes. ~SirScott
Atenea217 2007-01-28 ch 1,	I like it .. it's somehow catching.. _ Have a nice day.. Andrea B.
Moondog Dozier 2007-01-27 ch 1,	Marvelous tone and voice. The scene is quite relatable, as the reality of the situation occurs with such vividness through your word choice. "Your red fox", and "With her fiery hair", really gives this a visual setting through the detail. Excellent, excellent voice. Good write.
spiderfly 2007-01-27 ch 1,	Unfinished, it would appear. Good beginning. Too simple sentences, broken, disjointed. Tantalising subject. I eagerly wait for more.
MarvellousMarvin 2007-01-27 ch 1,	ooh i realy liked that! its very apt, and something that i can definitly relate to