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| PanicAttack757 2007-05-10 ch 1,   | again LOVE!! i really like your poetry and your writing style!! this was really good!! |
| putz-6 2007-01-28 ch 1, | Awsome poem, it's written very well. i can relate to it quite a bit. Thank-you for the review^^ |
| spyder98 2007-01-27 ch 1, | I like it, looking forward to more! signed, Adrian P.S. Check out some of my work, and make sure to review! |
| the-foresight 2007-01-27 ch 1, | It's quite good, you didn't make it too whiny which I like. What I didn;t like was the shortness of the lines, that's more of a personal thing for me. That considered it did give the poem a drive, made me keep reading. So for that it worked. |