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| Aero Faerie Extraordinaire 2007-01-30 ch 1,  | abuseI can completely relate to this poem, sadly. I love her description with inkstains etc, and the repetition of "even though she blew me off yesterday". The rhythm was a bit choppy but it's a good poem. I liked this. Much love, Aero |
| Chaotic Mind 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is amazing. Haven't gotten to read your other works yet, but I loved this. Just a little snapshot of life, but perfect. You really should read something newer than that Defying Death. It's one of those poems that's so old it bothers me. Hm. |