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Reviews For: Sylfaen

Live.Love.Dance
2007-02-12
ch 2,
abuseGood job. Please continue.
Live.Love.Dance
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abuseO sounds good.
squidnanime
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseO~ This story looks interesting... I have no idea what's going to happen...

I love the last sentence: But their heroes never came... So ominous...

*gives you owl-eyed look* O_O

Anyways, I like this start, and the idea is pretty cool. Nice job! To the alert list it goes!
Alysha
2007-01-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseI just realized that you use a lot of big words I didn't think I had a chance of knowing but apparently do as I understand and did understand it when you read it to me.

I love Irin's powers.

Now, I shall wait for Althaea to come...

LOVE.
B.S. Ha
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuseLooks interesting.
You're continuing this, right?
briannathewriter
2007-01-27
ch 1,
abuseCool. This was an awesome start to a story, or was it just a small thing? I'd like to see more to this and I think that there are some places in your writing that could be expanded by detail. Though, that was pretty cool to read.
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