 Live.Love.Dance 2007-02-12 . chapter 2Good job. Please continue. |
 Live.Love.Dance 2007-01-29 . chapter 1O sounds good. |
 squidnanime 2007-01-28 . chapter 1O~ This story looks interesting... I have no idea what's going to happen...
I love the last sentence: But their heroes never came... So ominous...
*gives you owl-eyed look* O_O
Anyways, I like this start, and the idea is pretty cool. Nice job! To the alert list it goes! |
 Alysha 2007-01-28 . chapter 1 I just realized that you use a lot of big words I didn't think I had a chance of knowing but apparently do as I understand and did understand it when you read it to me.
I love Irin's powers.
Now, I shall wait for Althaea to come...
LOVE. |
 B.S. Ha 2007-01-27 . chapter 1Looks interesting.
You're continuing this, right? |
 briannathewriter 2007-01-27 . chapter 1Cool. This was an awesome start to a story, or was it just a small thing? I'd like to see more to this and I think that there are some places in your writing that could be expanded by detail. Though, that was pretty cool to read. |