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| Live.Love.Dance 2007-02-12 ch 2,  | abuseGood job. Please continue. |
| Live.Love.Dance 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseO sounds good. |
| squidnanime 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseO~ This story looks interesting... I have no idea what's going to happen... I love the last sentence: But their heroes never came... So ominous... *gives you owl-eyed look* O_O Anyways, I like this start, and the idea is pretty cool. Nice job! To the alert list it goes! |
| Alysha 2007-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just realized that you use a lot of big words I didn't think I had a chance of knowing but apparently do as I understand and did understand it when you read it to me. I love Irin's powers. Now, I shall wait for Althaea to come... LOVE. |
| B.S. Ha 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseLooks interesting. You're continuing this, right? |
| briannathewriter 2007-01-27 ch 1, | abuseCool. This was an awesome start to a story, or was it just a small thing? I'd like to see more to this and I think that there are some places in your writing that could be expanded by detail. Though, that was pretty cool to read. |