Good job. Please continue.

O sounds good.

O~ This story looks interesting... I have no idea what's going to happen...

I love the last sentence: But their heroes never came... So ominous...

*gives you owl-eyed look* O_O

Anyways, I like this start, and the idea is pretty cool. Nice job! To the alert list it goes!

I just realized that you use a lot of big words I didn't think I had a chance of knowing but apparently do as I understand and did understand it when you read it to me.

I love Irin's powers.

Now, I shall wait for Althaea to come...

LOVE.

Looks interesting.
You're continuing this, right?

Cool. This was an awesome start to a story, or was it just a small thing? I'd like to see more to this and I think that there are some places in your writing that could be expanded by detail. Though, that was pretty cool to read.