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| from beneath the bell jar 2007-04-08 ch 1,  | abuseI don't know what to say exactly. It's hard to review pieces that are obviously very personal, but this was a very well-expressed poem, very powerful and dark. The ending was very hard-hitting: ("(between friends. Oh the irony) That you're sacred of losing control (just like you did with me) This is why I laugh"). |
| guin x h x 2007-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuse*hugs* some more i do think they all have dark hair and blue eyes,love. xx |
| Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-02-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat Job! I think I should read more of your work. Best Wishes! |