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| erica2004 2008-09-08 ch 3,   | Please please please, you must continue the story! |
| Gentle. Edge. 2008-09-05 ch 3, | That is so interesting. And I really think you should update soon before I go crazy from my curiosity xP |
| Venus Smurf1 2008-08-27 ch 3, | Fascinating story! I haven't been this intrigued by a plot in a long time. Brilliantly written, and very, very entertaining. Please update! |
| Agony of the Heart 2008-08-20 ch 3, | This is soo good. I'm guessing the she is 'Coffee Girl'! Can't wait for more! |
| griffensgrace 2008-04-04 ch 3, | This is such an Awesome story, but you haven't updated in a year! Why... why did I click this link... now the story tortures me so... |
| Ocean Traces 2008-03-27 ch 3, | I'm really hoping you update, because I'm completely hooked. It's so cruel that you haven't updated in a year ;_; |
| Roman C Lee 2008-03-24 ch 3, | I think weekends are best because I can do whatever i want then but anyday would be ok for updates; I just want updates! He,he this is a REALLY good story! Oh, Michael! Why didn't you talk to her when you had the chance? Maybe she would still be alive! Oh, i hope this story has a happy ending! Please keep writing! |
| Roman C Lee 2008-03-24 ch 2, | Hm, I really like this story! Poor girl, tortured with her want of him. lol How did you come up with this? I'm trying to make this a well rounded review but it's like 11 o'ckock and your story doesn't need to be improved upon; i think it could be published sfter it's done. You write nicely :) NO mistakes, your characters are believable, and i feel like they're real; which probobly show what a good writer you are AND how weird i am. ^_^ The word sentences paragraphs chapters all flow nicely, and the story's basic idea is really intreaging. *looking forward to the next chapter* |
| Roman C Lee 2008-03-24 ch 1, | Well, good for her for enjoying death! Ha,ha but i do know how much i would hate it if a ghost did that to me. This is interesting; i'm gonna keep reading! |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 3, | It is, indeed, interesting. Good job! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 2, | The narration is cute. ^^ Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-03-24 ch 1, | Interesting beginning. The title and summary made me laugh. Nice work. Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have an excellent day. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| norma 2008-03-17 ch 3, | i like it! i wanna know what happens next! hurry and update! :-) |
| Jovial 2008-02-10 ch 3, | i love this already. |
| Moons-and-Stars 2007-12-06 ch 3, | AHH! You have to update soon! I think I know who Coffee Girl is, but it's just a guess. Very funny story. Love the way you write. Update soon! |