Hey, great story! I like Michael a lot...I just wish we could see more of his personality, maybe find out what he does for living? I love that she watches him take showers almost like it's a tv show! I don't think I can blame her.
Update soon!

This is a really great fic. Very unique and original. So is Lisa "Coffee Girl"? I really hope you update soon. This story is so good! Great job.

I think, that this is a really interesting story and therefore, should be continued. Pretty please? The plot has been turned! It is not a female and not male who is the ghost and all your foreshadowing is leading me to believe that 'lisa' is coffegirl, and because of Micheal's desire to see her, 'lisa' can't continue onto the afterlife. Am I on the right track?

Well, anyways. Great job and UPDATE!:P

hey, this really is interesting and funny as hell! i don't think she is being a pervert by watching him sleep or every other thing he does, i think she is doing a good thing and it's a shame if she didn't. oh yeah, i'm blabbering! anyway, keep the story coming up, i'm really interested in the whole "coffee girl" thing.

Please please please, you must continue the story!

That is so interesting. And I really think you should update soon before I go crazy from my curiosity xP

Fascinating story! I haven't been this intrigued by a plot in a long time. Brilliantly written, and very, very entertaining. Please update!

This is soo good. I'm guessing the she is 'Coffee Girl'!

Can't wait for more!

This is such an Awesome story, but you haven't updated in a year! Why... why did I click this link... now the story tortures me so...

I'm really hoping you update, because I'm completely hooked. It's so cruel that you haven't updated in a year ;_;

I think weekends are best because I can do whatever i want then but anyday would be ok for updates; I just want updates! He,he this is a REALLY good story! Oh, Michael! Why didn't you talk to her when you had the chance? Maybe she would still be alive! Oh, i hope this story has a happy ending! Please keep writing!

Hm, I really like this story! Poor girl, tortured with her want of him. lol How did you come up with this? I'm trying to make this a well rounded review but it's like 11 o'ckock and your story doesn't need to be improved upon; i think it could be published sfter it's done. You write nicely :) NO mistakes, your characters are believable, and i feel like they're real; which probobly show what a good writer you are AND how weird i am. ^_^ The word sentences paragraphs chapters all flow nicely, and the story's basic idea is really intreaging. *looking forward to the next chapter*

Well, good for her for enjoying death! Ha,ha but i do know how much i would hate it if a ghost did that to me. This is interesting; i'm gonna keep reading!

It is, indeed, interesting. Good job!

~Twilight Starr~

The narration is cute. ^^ Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~