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| pandasXrobots 2008-03-22 ch 10,   | oh my gosh! you have to update more more maor! im so in love with this story and wahh!! i feel so sympathetic for andrew but please do more! |
| pandasXrobots 2008-03-21 ch 3, | >< oh my gosh! i want to beat isaac's father with my pogo stick!! he just ** me off and i feel soo sorry for isaac. i cand feel his pain haha but awesomenesslyness story!! ^_^ okay, i read more now |
| Chipmunk-Chihuahua hybrid 2008-02-20 ch 10, | I like it, this is much better than your stories on the fanfic site, I think. |
| River 2008-01-30 ch 10, | Hey, I just read the whole thing and I have to say, it's very good. I like the characters a lot; they're rather compelling. And I like your writing style too. It's unique but in a good way. Please update soon, I'll be watching out for this one! Much Respect, River |
| paputsza 2008-01-28 ch 10, | i'm /really/ happy that you're updating. |
| paputsza 2008-01-28 ch 9, | LIES! FOOTBALL IS NEVER FUN! Guys just say that as a way to watch it with someone. It's only allright if you don't have to actually watch it. And as far as violence is concerned, i like rugby, hockey, rodeo, and badmitton better. At least the goings on in badmitton's a bit more complicated, since i've never seen an entire game. it's like some soccer/hockey/egg toss/egg on spoon hybrid with little baskets to carry the ball around in and played entirely by pale europeans avoiding getting hit by sticks. Is it wrong that i consider martial arts the best sport of them all. XD though tennis is good if you like skirts and laziness. |
| paputsza 2008-01-28 ch 8, | well now they're both specail. m'sorry. i just can't take retardation seriously. i've seen some good movies based on it. and a good song or two. ever heard "Just A little bit specail" by stephan lynch. wonderful musicain, aye. |
| paputsza 2008-01-28 ch 5, | please have a happy ending. i read this one teenage abuse thing and the lover died at the end in the hospital. so sad. it even had an oldies song "knock knock knocking on heaven's door" i hate nifty(dot)net for that reason. The stuff is either really sad or focused on putting a **(if you can imagine having one) in something else's bum. It goes on like that for a while. |
| paputsza 2008-01-27 ch 1, | i think you may be able to categorize this as angst. just a bit. It's not so general, i like it muchly though. |
| Iizolda 2008-01-27 ch 10, | OMG! Isaac is so pathetic! He thinks that he's the broken one in their new relationship but his not! Andrew condition is so much worse right now and Isaac is so selfish! Just my random thoughts about chapter 10 xD |
| merrymowmow 2007-12-11 ch 10, | I was wondering when you're going to update? |
| gothicHobbit08 2007-08-28 ch 9, | You can't just leave this story like this!! it needs to keep going! Somebody needs to adopt Isaac, and he and Andrew need to live happily ever after! And his dad needs life in prison! |
| Kyobouryuu Arashi 2007-08-11 ch 9, | Looks like things are going to get complicated from here on in... Isaac and Andrew really need one another... |
| Kyobouryuu Arashi 2007-08-11 ch 2, | Hi Never mind... I was going to ask that you please put something to indicate the change in viewpoints but quickly skipped to the last chapter and realised that you do... It gets a little confusing when you jump perspectives with no warnings... other than that I am really enjoying this and hope you continue... I really hope things get better... Thankies for the story |
| KissMyConverse 2007-08-07 ch 9, | This chapter made me smile. :] Isaac is finally getting a break. Just...don't let him hook up with Owen. I like Andrew/Isaac way too much for that. Ha. |