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vaudeville summers 2008-03-21 ch 10,	abuseOh Jesus. Have decided I'm in love with your writing and that this is one of the cutest, most developed stories I've ever read.^^ Now onto reading everything else you've posted here. Yayay sequel time! xD ((favorited, the works)) ~DeAnna
quiet-zone 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abusePromising first chapter, I haven't read the rest yet. The descriptions are fantastic, and a little m/m never hurt anyone ;-) .
BTSSB 2007-07-06 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is really good. The characters so far are really great, and your writing style is awesome. I'm totally reading more! clickclick Next chapter, please, Mr. Mouse! :3
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 8,	abuseWaah! DAME! cries I see I was wrong about the Dame Julian thing. Shame. it would've been hot. Have set you to alert to find out when you update...
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 7,	abuseOh my goodness. My Chemical Romance clothing and the Abhorsen books by Garth Nix. Is Dame a very distant relative of mine or something? But Aubrey... bit of a shocker, this Gabe and Aubrey thing. So what was that with William? Off to the next chapter...
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 6,	abuseOMG!! I HAVE THAT HOODIE! Well, I tore it too badly whilst out with some friends so I had to throw it away, so technically I USED to have that hoodie, but it's still a freaky coinkidink and a half. Bailey is awesome. Love this chapter. off to read the next one.
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 5,	abuseBWAHAHAHAHA! 'no one saw it coming' my butt! I did! I AM SO AWESOME! I have THE superior gaydar. Gabe and William! Did I, or did I not mention that in a prior review? I asked if there was something between them? Proof that I am a ** hag. YAY! I looked back at the summary, and so I've just realised that you said slash anyway, but I seem to have the pairings all up there. And I realised there was slash without remembering your summary. Which is just that special. Because I'm cool like that.
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 4,	abuseThere must be yaoi somewhere. I mean, the clues are everywhere in this chappie. 'Lord, if I didn’t know any better, I would have sworn he was going to rape me' Morbid and obvious. 'Julian took another step forwards; we were uncomfortably close, hips brushing' HIPS BRUSHING? Oh, come on. 'So the boy had a bit of a sadistic streak; he was still rich, gorgeous, and popular, not to mention uncannily talented at anything he did.' Could be a jealous point, but sounds like admiration to me. "Though I did expect a bit more from you, Damian love." Ah, the L word. Plus Julian is kind of complimenting him, saying that he expected MORE. 'But no, because who cares about what Damian thinks, so long as we can let him be fondled by jocks and scarred for life? I shall never feel clean again.' Bwahaha. getting grouchy just by jocks carrying you, Dame? Sounds like a serious case of homophobia or a serious case of DENIAL! cackles “You always have to make things more difficult for yourself, don’t you? Is it so difficult to say hello?” (Julian's thoughts, it was a flashback thing-y, right?) Everything, even a damn teacher, reminds him of Julian! can't get him out of his head, can he? Obsessive... I love to butcher canon... gigglesnort off to read next chapter...
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 3,	abuseSweet. halloween is so fun! I don't dress up in fancy costumes for it any more but I wear my darkest, most gothic emo clothing (Blue Banana store is surely a god send) and head out with my friends. You're never too old for free candy, after all XD I feel loved with my hits, too. I've got 24 hits for Spot The Difference already and I only posted it yesterday! (Then again I do have quite a few people who have set me to their story alerts 'case of Clubbing at Fifteen, but whatever) I think CaF might have 8500 hits maybe... off to next chapter...
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 2,	abuse:O Poor Gabe! Poor Dame! hugs both This may just be my yaoi obsessed mind finding hints that aren't even there, but is there something more to how Gabe feels for William...? I would love you forever if that's so. Off to read more. Pip-pip!
the Berserker 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseThis made me both tense up in fear for Damnian and laugh til my ribs hurt. I'm so stoked that a writer like you could give little old me a good review! And now I'm off to read (and possibly review, too) all the other chapters... (Added you to my faves, btw)
Back of Beyond 2007-06-16 ch 8,	abuseGreat story, can't wait for the next chapter! Though I'll be gutted when it's over. :(
Sir Joe the Knight 2007-04-25 ch 7,	abuseok good. keep writing. and to everyone : ignore my earlier review. i was high on sugar. yay. and i lied. i actually wasnt writing a story then. but now i am and its posted so check it out. this is my fav fictionpress story and i wuv it. hurry up with the next chapter! at least yours are long chapters unlike mine. anyways i should start my homework. bleh >_< anywayz see u at school.
The Cowardly Lion 2007-04-21 ch 1,	abusehaha emo reform school! That's funny and this is a good story :)
stupid.bloody.tuesday 2007-04-06 ch 6,	abuseHA! it took me forever, but i finally finished reading this. i remember you saying something about another chappie? and niceness with french-y-ness.anyways i'm rambling so...

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