wow this reminds me of a daydream type of story. i really like the ending.

at first i didn't understand what it was about. i thought maybe she was hiding from her father or something since she was acting a little bit scared. but then he kissed her so i figured it may have been her boyfriend. but then i was surprised by the little twist that his girlfriend walked in on him kissing her.

this is great writing, keep up the good work.

great story, but it's kinda mean how the guy left his gf for her best friend or sumtin like that...and i guess i'm sorry that this didnt' happen to u...read my stories too