Reviews for Another Day No More

Osunale 2007-02-27 ch 1,	abuseThe final line is immensely satisfying, an excellent song ending. I love the waste-haste rhyme and the title, which is just wonderful. "I can feel a weight in my heart / WHY IS IT THAT IT STARTS?!" - these lines have a few little quirks: the 'I can feel' is a weak start-off, mostly because it's already used in a repeated phrase ("I can feel the tears...), and the second line seems too syllabled when read, though since it's a song it's also a sound that could be sung away shrugs. Good feeling, some really good word usage. Nice work, keep writing!
hateandkill-D 2007-02-24 ch 1,	abuseAw, very nice job on this. I love the way it's written. Great job keep it up!
daretobe-dIfFeRnT 2007-01-27 ch 1,	abusewow that was good:) have you ever read that story Reason and Romance by uhm..i think it was Myrika, i think she's in my favs if you want to check it out. but anyway, i think you could relate to the main character and her ex-boyfriend plus it was just an all-around awesome fic:D