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| Royal Bliss 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis isn't really anything. It just seemed like you wanted to write about rape/yaoi/pedophilia because you're into that. And what does Dikos mean... |
| kitty003 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusethat was so cruel! but still good. even if i do feel kind of bad for wander... |
| bloody-angel147 2007-11-26 ch 1, | abuseO.O...very confusing...but i like it X3 could i please get an explanation? |
| MlleKathy 2007-10-19 ch 1, | abuseOO...I feel so sorry for that boy... Dang, that man was harsh TT TT *hugs the boy* 'Tis okay. I like the story :0 Wont you write more? That guy is cruel... He had no remorse whatsoever. |
| Kiviquespel 2007-06-30 ch 1, | abuseOh I really liked how you started off this story..jumping right into it - i really liked that! You could've added a bit more description, but so far I liked it! |
| kanari kireteru doll 2007-04-07 ch 1, | abuse*review tag* well written; I like your word choice. this subject is very chilling to me because I have had a friend who was violated in a sexual manner... this made my stomach lurch... .in a good way though. It means you tapped my emotions. tag back please and thanks! |