is this a one shot? or can i beg ya fro another chapter? i liek where this is going and i can kinda relate with the main girlie. so woo go you!

This was so good. You're a Degrassi fan too? Please make some Fanfictions with that (A). You're great:) And, if you wanna read something not so good, my username is MaryAuksi.

Anyway, This is really-really good:)

Lol for some reason I found this funny! its really good!

Although you have a few grammar mistakes and sentences that drew away from the anxious feeling you were creating, I loved this. I like how you describe he in layers and the whole context of the story questions really who's more obsessed? Him or her? It's crazy especially with the last sentence but it really gives the oneshot potential.
xnonax

hm. I like the concept and the frantic-ness near the end was excellent! but it does need some work. Just some general touching up here and there...
I like it, though.
~dragonzz~

Interesting story. It seems like its...hm, missing something? I don't know. Try rewriting parts or adding more words and see if you can flesh it out. One more thing; this rating should probably be more like a T. Ten year olds shouldn't be reading it, in other words. So T it is.
-Amber