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| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI can hardly right true emotions like some I've read, this included. I have twice - one is on my page - A Mournful Reverie, it's called. Keep writing and have faith. Constance |
| Tom 2007-01-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseI hate this poem, its well written.. but I hate it, I hate that you feel this way and I love you for being able too. Another couple of poems like this and I think I'll end up hating the guy its about too.. Aside from that, its really quiet vivid, excellent word usage, probably quiet stiring even from an entirely inpersonal standpoint, good stuff |