Oh, this is beautiful! It's so full of longing and wistfulness, I think. It's wonderfully written. I especially like the first stave. You use such visual imagery, I love it! Inky blackness, watercolor sunset, glittering sky of pearls and crystals... Really wonderful! Keep up the good work, Steph! :)

Hug and kisses,

Lara

I dost like it! M, mermaids. Kudos!