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| AluminumMuse 2007-04-11 ch 1,   | Great idea, but it would be helpful if you explained how dark was tempting, delving a little deeper into a logical arguement. I think it would be more provacative as a debate: something that would leave the reader wondering if you chose right. |
| softlycryingrain 2007-02-16 ch 1, | very interesting...and true. I think we've all been there, and often, it's hard to tell which choice is the "right" one... well, good job as always. You seem to have pondered this a great deal. Oh, and "A Wrinkle in Time" is a very good book, I must agree. You can be very inspiring, you know that? keep up the good work. ~SCR |
| Gareth 2007-01-28 ch 1, | Don't know what to say. It's bloody good. "The dimmest of lights can drive away even the deepest darkness of the night." Great line. Very optimistic... and for a pessimist I'm finding that I seem to be agreeing fairly easily... Gareth -- Scotland Forever |
| Ironic Presence 2007-01-28 ch 1, | *mouth agape* I CONGRATULATE YOU! I have been there, too... I am there, in fact, where the lines of light and darkness are gray, where heroes or villains are formed... I also choose the light, but the question is, will I accidentally become a villain, though I try to walk in light? Hmm... This is my favorite thing I've ever read, ever, because I could relate you every line. It was awesome. Um, I've actually never read "A Wrinkle in Time"... perhaps now I may... Bravi again. |