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| Sheepie 2008-12-01 ch 7, | It's late and I need to be getting to bed since I have work tomorrow. Instead though I'm reading. Or I was, but now I'm not. It's hard to pull away though. I want to find out if it really was Kayla. I feel so bad for Steven, but I have to admit Arthur is damn sexy. You have to love the psychos. At least until you're in that situation. I like it a lot so far. I'll end up finishing reading the rest tomorrow, so update soon! I really wanna find out what kind of organization/set up Arthur has going on! What's up with all the boys? And why the hell is he so obsessed with Steven? Great job, can't wait to read more! :) |
| Liviania 2008-11-30 ch 12, | I think the dream worked without italics because it was pretty clear when he snapped out of it. That's an odd development. Livi |
| Catseye*Rose 2008-11-22 ch 12, | "“Lost it?” I asked incredulously. “What do you mean, lost it? Like, ‘Golly gee, I think I misplaced my **’? How the hell did he lose it?”" will be my favourite line forever, I think. I couldn't stop laughing. XD Hm, I wonder if that's true? And if so, was it actually Arthur with Cecelia? I highly doubt it was Twitch... Hmm... Aw, Twitch is warming up to him! But trying to cut up a grapefruit with a plastic knife does not sound fun. Ooh, dream sequence...I wonder what it all means? :O Ah, so much suspence ^^ |
| narcissistic 2008-11-22 ch 12, | Omg that was soo good.. i mean i know you dont like it very much but it's just great to see an update. haha now im wondering...does he have a **?? |
| xanthofile 2008-11-21 ch 12, | ok, you asked for my honest opinion, and while it took me a while to find the spare moments to reread it and give it my full attention, i managed to do so today. heh. anyway, i still hold with my original thought about the whole thing. i like where it's going--besides, you're not the only one whose review counts have gone down lately. maybe it's a site-wide thing. anyway, i say stick to what you've got going on, because i LOVE it ALL. *fansquee* hehe. >< ~xanth |
| sicca-chan 2008-11-21 ch 12, | I can't believe I forgot to read this chapter. o...0 Shame on me!! Interesting chapter... Trenton is laking the equipment? Indeed, who raped Cecelia then? By the way, the mystery that surrounds the promises is so intriguing. =D |
| etherealrain 2008-11-20 ch 12, | Well this is an interesting revelation...can't wait for your next chapter, LOVE IT! |
| Rachelmorph 2008-11-19 ch 9, | Oh, I actually got the pomegranate seed reference. I'm very proud of myself. This story is strange and bizarre, and I can't look away. |
| Bloodfeeder 2008-11-19 ch 12, | So... who raped Celica? I like Celica... she's a little creepy, but I definitly like her. So does Twitch have a case of likeing his kidnappers or what? There's an official name for that too, when you develope an affection for the people who've captured you... Ohh, I like the Art by Cracked Butterfruit. He's like how I imagined him- you know, naughty and all. Lee |
| StoicCrying 2008-11-19 ch 12, | I am disturbed by this story, yet very captivated! It has mystery,drama, and (I guess to me) humor. I love it! please update sooN! |
| anon. 2008-11-18 ch 12, | If I could review this a thousand times I would, though I imagine I would get rather repetitive after a very short while. Instead I'll review once and just tell you that I really enjoy this story. It's incredibly captivating and unpredictable (for me, at any rate) and those are both qualities which tend to be very rare in this cesspool of homoerotic fantasies written by idealistic 12 year olds. The beginning of this chapter wasn't confusing; I think it's fine to leave it in normal format. Also, I didn't think this chapter was all that bad - Stuff Happened without it feeling like a chapter devoted to making Stuff Happen. That's always a good thing in my book. 8D |
| Cold War Kid 2008-11-18 ch 12, | i really, really, really like it. (yes. three whole "really's" lol.) very suspenseful and all that. does trenton really not have a dick? because that would be... well, odd, to say the least, i guess. update soon! =] |
| Oki3xDoki3 2008-11-18 ch 12, | omg sometimes i hate you I WANT MORE CHAPTERS FROM YOU god, this just makes me wanna fan art all over again >. |
| TenshiGosuperu 2008-11-17 ch 12, | That's what Trenton deserves! --indignant-- But that was a surprise. I never would have guessed that Trenton was...lacking his equipment. Great chapter. :) Can't wait for more. |
| Neven35 2008-11-17 ch 1, | To be honest, I was like 'wtf?!' while I was reading but now I really want to read it to the end. It's...interesting lol. |