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| love you to death 2007-06-05 ch 1,   | O__O ... owow. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-04-02 ch 1, | This piece is so brutal and piercing! You used such strong, powerful words and everything came together so well! You are very talented and I admire your work! Amazing job! I'm adding you to my favorites. =) |
| shooting stars and secrets 2007-03-23 ch 1, | this is so... amazing. I love the repetition and imagery. Beautiful. |
| AllyCred 2007-02-02 ch 1, | I love this its just so dark... The repitition at the beginning and end of each line was just pure genius, i couldn't tear myself away! This is a beautiful piece and i especially love the ending, very powerful! Well done! Lotsa Love ~AC~ |
| bitterlyysweetchoco 2007-02-02 ch 1, | Interesting! Normally I don't like poems like this but this one was interesting. Imagery was good and present |
| polka dots and addictions 2007-01-30 ch 1, | this is an /incredibally/ powerful poem. the bits of repetition that you've used at the begining & end of each verse work nicely, & the ending just completes it in that bittersweet way. lovely work, & thanks for the review. ~Bex xx |
| Later. 2007-01-29 ch 1, | pretty. |
| MarvellousMarvin 2007-01-28 ch 1, | wow. i really like that; i like the brutality of the words. it's something that you see quite a lot amongst girls, and something which i reckon probably affects quite a lot. you cover the topic well |