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| detective 2008-05-19 ch 1,  | Aw, I'm sorry. |
| dominic+leo 2008-03-06 ch 1,  | again so sad, and yet... enpowering? love your writing, i really do. it makes me think about life and it's hardships and everything one needs to sacrifice to be happy. it also reminds me the as a whole the world is truely a cruel place, but even when people hurt you and push you down that eventuall you can overcome it and who knows maybe find love? i don't know. i just wanted to comment and say that this aswell tuched my heart. i think you're becoming a fav. of mine. keep writing, it does good deeds and helps those who need to feel normal. atleast it helps me not feel like i'm the only one going through this. if it's not too personal... who hurt you? And more importantly do i need to send them a nasty gram? (Mean words i mean)? 'cause i will. hope you feel okay ^_^ -Dommy |
| red-headed psychopaths want... 2007-11-13 ch 1, | Dude that is so depressing... Great job! ^.^ |
| Ally-Kat722 2007-01-28 ch 1, | *hugs* I wish you the best of luck. Fly free. ~Someone who cares |
| Siyaa 2007-01-28 ch 1, | Man, if I was a guy, and gay, I would kiss you. But I'm not, so have a hug instead. *hugs* :P |
| vimaro22 2007-01-27 ch 1, | This is sad and happy, and I'm not exactly sure which one is stronger. It appears as though you're trying to portray more of a happier tone, since you're free and you can do as you wish now without being tied down, but it's also coming across as a bit sad. It sounds as though you've been this way for so long that it's a bit of a shock now that you're rid of him, and that there's still a hint of anger there at him. I don't know... That's just my take. I could be completely off (knowing me and my interpretations, I usually am). However, it was still a good one-shot and I liked it a lot. |