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| Tom 2007-07-20 ch 1,  | I said I'd never forget and I still dont think I will. I just read a really good poem by another friend of mine and it made me think of you and this site, I recommended it to her as well. I'm more in love with this poem 'now' then when I first read it. It's one of the best things anyones ever given me Dana. Afterall, I cant brake it or eat it ;) Thankyou |
| CELESTIAL*VISIONARY 2007-05-31 ch 1,  | I don't get the end - "only death can bring the end of the war"? I get that life's a battle, but I wouldn't consider it a war. I hope I'm not totally misinterpreting this. Anyway, I really like the rest, the end just seems...wrong to me, like it sticks out in a bad way. I don't know. Keep writing, Dana. Constance |
| Tom 2007-01-27 ch 1, | Well I've never had a poem written inspired by me before! I really like it hey, love it actually.. but the fact you wrote it and I motivated it makes me kinda byased on that one lol. It's good stuff! x I'll never forget you did this. |