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| Cross Rose 2007-06-08 ch 1, | I really like it...good work here. |
| Gulia 2007-03-02 ch 1, | *hugs* |
| pukein ivy 2007-01-28 ch 1, | Sad and a little melodramatic. Perhaps in your writting your source of pain...it'd give this more authenticity. But it was nice, I suppose, if not a little vague. |
| Spleeny 2007-01-28 ch 1, | "Oozing/Vermilion/Crimson" and "Like a sad ebon rose" were my favorite moments. Very elegant. I'm pleased. LXF |
| criti-sized 2007-01-28 ch 1, | This was an very nice poem that expressed a lot of emotion in it. There were a few awkward sentences in it, but everything came out just right and great. |