I really like it...good work here.

*hugs*

Sad and a little melodramatic. Perhaps in your writting your source of pain...it'd give this more authenticity. But it was nice, I suppose, if not a little vague.

"Oozing/Vermilion/Crimson" and "Like a sad ebon rose" were my favorite moments. Very elegant. I'm pleased.

LXF

This was an very nice poem that expressed a lot of emotion in it. There were a few awkward sentences in it, but everything came out just right and great.