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Reviews For: Apple Pie

fatbird33 2008-08-01 ch 1,	i liked the falling to bits part. because apple pie does fall to bits! good similie
Tell Me Tall Tales 2007-03-24 ch 1,	Clever haiku :) Good job!
citixlitesxburnxtehxdead 2007-02-18 ch 1,	this is really good. the comparison is right on. loved it. ~ego
yspgirl 2007-02-15 ch 1,	wow. i REALLY like this. and i normally don't like haikus. this is beautifully crafted. -aly
singxmextoxsleep-13 2007-02-12 ch 1,	apple pie huh? well that was a good haiku better then what i can do
dress her up in fairytales 2007-02-07 ch 1,	i can taste this. and it tastes amazing.
shooting stars and secrets 2007-02-02 ch 1,	:) I liked this poem. It made me smile [:)] It sounds kind of weird to say this... but thats actually a good thing to compare some one to. :)
Annaece's Forsaken Corpse 2007-01-31 ch 1,	Cute poem. very sweet...i'd give a longer review but a friend of mine is talking about mosh pits & i'm at school xD
Basara 2007-01-30 ch 1,	ouch... sweet yet saddening... nice...
Emily ^^ 2007-01-29 ch 1,	Wow, really good imagery - short but sweet - or not so sweet, lol. But still fantastic. ^^ Emily x x
hateandkill-D 2007-01-28 ch 1,	Cool. Beautiful job on this!! Keep it up!!
i.am.the.winter 2007-01-28 ch 1,	nice =) i like the image you've put into my head. - i.am.the.winter
august harlequin 2007-01-28 ch 1,	Every word and every line created by the words is perfect. They fit together perfectly and encompass so much. I love it.
Spleeny 2007-01-28 ch 1,	Aww, I adore this. Seriously, it's perfect in every way, and it makes me think of apple pie, which is delicious. Good work. LXF
pukein ivy 2007-01-28 ch 1,	Haha! Nice. Made me snicker. Hmm, there's the song from The Bastard Faeries called Apple Pie. It'd do you good to listen. Haha, this was breif but I'm adding it onto my list of favorites

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