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| Bluorange 2008-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseTotally magnificent, thoroughly beautiful and completely captivating! I can't wait to read more! It's sounds like a good romance! The only one I have right now are about two gay guys, which I'm not sure would be quite so appealing. YOu know my friend J Paine? I found you're story through him/her. You have nice style! Good job! |
| Autumn of Tears 2008-01-10 ch 2, | abuseI'm a little confused over some of this. At the beginning of Noble Pov, you said that he was beating Artemis, but then he doesn't understand why or who was beating her. Was he justlying or...? |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-01-09 ch 7, | abuseTge only thing in ur entire story that confuses me is the whole thing about donna and aphrodite and dmitiri. Love triangles are so weird, lol. |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-01-08 ch 9, | abusealrigth, i lovd ur story. Plz write a sequel! Usually, i write more mature reviews..but i cant help it! this story was fantastic! u have a gift in writing. cant wait to see more of ur work. -Salem |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-01-08 ch 5, | abuseok. Im a TOTAL greek geek so everytime u used a greek name, i was thrilled, lol. Cant wait to read the nxt chapter. -Salem |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-01-08 ch 3, | abuseomg. ok, second review, same as the first. this is one of the best stories ive read in ages.sry i cant say more. -salem |
| Lady of Secrets 2008-01-08 ch 2, | abuseok. this story is freaking fantastic! im not just sayign that. Honestly. |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 9, | abusewow that was really good I just knew Noble was bad news and "m happy Artimis and Hunter were together in the end. . .GREAT JOB! ^_^ and I read your profile. ..you shouldn't be so ** yourself this was relly good. . .then again I myself am very self critical so who am I to tell you what to do. . .we all have our flaws. . . |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 8, | abusewow everything in the story is just so sudden but in order to keep up with it you can't really stop to think about anything. . . |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 7, | abusewell that a change. . .first she scoffed at him and now she's kissing him and calling im sweetie. . .is something going on? lol jk ^_^ |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 6, | abuseI think Hunter would be better or Artimis than Noble |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 5, | abuse. . .that was odd but intresting. . .^_^ |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 4, | abuseYAY! Things have become much clearer! ^_^ |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 3, | abusewow that was sudden. . .and odd. . .well won't find out what happens with out reading more. . .^_^ |
| xXRei-DamienXx 2007-12-27 ch 2, | abuseI'm kinda confused and the supsense is killing me. . .in a good way though it makes me egar to read more. . .^_^ |