very vivid!

you painted a cliche-ish dramatic situation with rainbow colors!

*adds to favorites*

I really, really love it. Beautiful poem.

Beautiful. I love the last four or so lines especially. I'm running out of adjectives to describe your poetry.

Guh.

This is, uh, hot.

Really really hot. The last whole image-part-just does it for me; I think it is just the ["you are the only girl i'll ever fuck" and you know that i mean more than that, you know i mean the words i have never said"] is just so lovely.

Wow.

- Noelle

Ooh, wow. I love the feel of this - how it feels like a confessional, and it just keeps spinning and spinning and you can't stop reading it. Very nice. You have great details, and yeah, just a great piece. Keep writing! :)

*Big grin* You I'm going to love anything you write when you mention werewolves.

I find this to be one of the most real poems you've written. I like that...a lot. By "real", I mean, one that you've only taken slight poetical license with. I like the emotion in this...and the setting. Sometimes, things are more clearly seen in the near-dark.

Anyway, my favorite parts: "like the werewolf she wishes she was and under that night sky I whisper lullabies as old as time itself"..."my love is twofold once you begin to undress"..."and you know that i mean more than that, you know i mean the words i have never said".

Beautiful.

That's really all that can be said.

i love the ending the most. especially "as i bring you close to insanity". it's just...gah. you make my brain melt and i love it.

wonderful.