i have only 1 thing to say... hury up and post the next chapther... i love how u write...

You had to stop right there didn't you, you evil, little...
PLease sir, can we have another chapter?

Awh, poor guy everyone doesn't believe in him, and he was trying to be nice only to get shot down. Poor little guy. :( *sniffle* but it's good and kinda already fluffy sounding...that's not a bad thing. :) good job.

--pokes you with a stick and swigs some whiskey-- Cool chapter. Do booze, not drugs. But don't do whiskey, 'cause it's gross. Do... bicardi breezers, or vodka cruisers ^^

Can't wait for the next chapter.

I have just started reading this story and may I say it's AWESOME!
It's so well written and so appealing! I love it!

It was all right. I have a feeling the next chapter will be better. xD

And dang, Jacque is quick to judge. Hate someone for being a little snippy after he broke into their room and bugged them about their personal businness? Haha. Pretty naive.

*pokes* Hey, it is I. Sorry I didn't review for the last chapter. I love where the story is going, I love Ellie *hugs*, and I love muffins, so its all good! Heh, don't keep me waiting for the next chapter ~_~ (even if I hadn't updated my story since last month...). Oi. Anywho, keep up the great work!

~DiamondKing

hey, Derek! Long time no see! um...well, on your reviews, that is. I have to say that I like this story lots, but Captive in a New Light kind of has this monosyllabic feel to it. Maybe it's just me...probably is. Well, I still think you should add more thoughts to his character. Of course, it's always up to you! :)

aw, poor piglet. (that's kinda cute...) I wonder who that French speaking Brit was and why he was crying? Jacque'll find out, I know it ^^ keep up the great work!

Bravissimo! I'll poke you for you if you want me to. That prison dude sounds inhuman, but the last line was a classic. Yea, your humour shines out alright. It's subtle and makes it a little more cheery than the first sad scene. Write more soon. It's a nice fresh idea.

~~[[Jed]]~~

What I find great is how you've made it feel really authentic, that's a big word for me so pat me on the back and say well done. It's set in France right in the 1900s? Well it feels like it alright. It's great.

~~[[Jed]]~~

I only realized you had written this story and that you had this whole shared account thing when I read your own profile. I liek it so far. It's upsetting though and great drama!

~~[[Jed]]~~

There are a lot of powerful emotions throughout this so far. It's quite something. You don't find many stories that can make you feel so involved and I think this one is the best I have stumbled across so far! Truly, congratulations. Continue soon.

I didn't realize you had written this...I have some catching up to do then. I'm enjoying it so far.

Good story. Continue soon.

Check mine out sometime.