Reviews for Captive in a New Light

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Lielie 2007-07-31 ch 4,	i have only 1 thing to say... hury up and post the next chapther... i love how u write...
a creature 2007-04-18 ch 4,	You had to stop right there didn't you, you evil, little... PLease sir, can we have another chapter?
Midnights Scream 2007-02-20 ch 3,	Awh, poor guy everyone doesn't believe in him, and he was trying to be nice only to get shot down. Poor little guy. :( sniffle but it's good and kinda already fluffy sounding...that's not a bad thing. :) good job.
Cardi 2007-02-18 ch 3,	--pokes you with a stick and swigs some whiskey-- Cool chapter. Do booze, not drugs. But don't do whiskey, 'cause it's gross. Do... bicardi breezers, or vodka cruisers ^^ Can't wait for the next chapter.
Essence of the Heart 2007-02-18 ch 1,	I have just started reading this story and may I say it's AWESOME! It's so well written and so appealing! I love it!
FoxyGrampa 2007-02-18 ch 3,	It was all right. I have a feeling the next chapter will be better. xD And dang, Jacque is quick to judge. Hate someone for being a little snippy after he broke into their room and bugged them about their personal businness? Haha. Pretty naive.
DiamondKing 2007-02-18 ch 3,	pokes Hey, it is I. Sorry I didn't review for the last chapter. I love where the story is going, I love Ellie hugs, and I love muffins, so its all good! Heh, don't keep me waiting for the next chapter ~_~ (even if I hadn't updated my story since last month...). Oi. Anywho, keep up the great work! ~DiamondKing
InnocentSinIncarnate 2007-02-18 ch 3,	hey, Derek! Long time no see! um...well, on your reviews, that is. I have to say that I like this story lots, but Captive in a New Light kind of has this monosyllabic feel to it. Maybe it's just me...probably is. Well, I still think you should add more thoughts to his character. Of course, it's always up to you! :)
Noihseret 2007-02-18 ch 3,	aw, poor piglet. (that's kinda cute...) I wonder who that French speaking Brit was and why he was crying? Jacque'll find out, I know it ^^ keep up the great work!
Do Not Feed this Animal 2007-02-18 ch 3,	Bravissimo! I'll poke you for you if you want me to. That prison dude sounds inhuman, but the last line was a classic. Yea, your humour shines out alright. It's subtle and makes it a little more cheery than the first sad scene. Write more soon. It's a nice fresh idea. ~~[[Jed]]~~
Do Not Feed this Animal 2007-02-18 ch 2,	What I find great is how you've made it feel really authentic, that's a big word for me so pat me on the back and say well done. It's set in France right in the 1900s? Well it feels like it alright. It's great. ~~[[Jed]]~~
Do Not Feed this Animal 2007-02-18 ch 1,	I only realized you had written this story and that you had this whole shared account thing when I read your own profile. I liek it so far. It's upsetting though and great drama! ~~[[Jed]]~~
Callum Sirryn-Sehnya 2007-02-11 ch 2,	There are a lot of powerful emotions throughout this so far. It's quite something. You don't find many stories that can make you feel so involved and I think this one is the best I have stumbled across so far! Truly, congratulations. Continue soon.
Callum Sirryn-Sehnya 2007-02-11 ch 1,	I didn't realize you had written this...I have some catching up to do then. I'm enjoying it so far.
Dragonfire411 2007-02-08 ch 2,	Good story. Continue soon. Check mine out sometime.

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