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| -MyInspiration- 2007-02-17 ch 1,   | You are a beautiful writer when it comes to narrationa nd imagery, but your dialogues is weak and unrealistic, all very similar to me. I have a hard time writing realistic dialogue, and maybe that (or my lack of patience)is why I stick mainly to poems. Try working a bit more on the dialogue, but otherwise it is really good. please continue. |