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Dollface Dead
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseOkay, this is just plain awesome. A-W-E-S-whatever. It's not very often I run across stuff like this on this site. Definately going on my favs! :D

Usually I can pick out one line I really like about a poem and be lukewarm about the rest, but this was just excellent all over. Bravo!
Emma the Paradox
2007-01-28
ch 1,
abuseWow. Amazing. Creative. Unique. Inventive. Thoughtful. Awesome... just... wow. This totally blew me away. Each line fits so perfectly, and though one could point out that stanzas seem to follow different rhythms, I like that. It gives the impression that there are a lot of different people admitting and such. Well, at least that's the feeling I got from this.

I'm having some trouble being constructive here, I know... Heh. Well, I suppose a bunch of praise must suffice then. This automatically goes on my favorites... good job. :]
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