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| Elaine 2007-04-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseSome good insight here. A little randomm though. It's like you know what you want to say, but are hedging from saying it. Clean it up a little and say what you really want to say and it will communicate to the reader. |
| connie 2007-03-07 ch 1, anon. | abusehey kingy its me i was curious of this thing and thought id better investigate it for my self its touching and to answer the question you asked last week no i just am not ready to try thiz again how do i know your serious this time last time you said that you later took it back as a joke best friends definently but not gf and bf yer i like you that way but i need proof that your serioua thia time k later |
| Sukidayo 2007-01-28 ch 1, | abuseI'm tired and it's late. I read this once and it made no sense. I'll re-read it tomorrow and elaborate more on it. But right off the back, It's not that bad. ;) -Shimo |