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| G.C MacBeth 2007-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the way you started your story. It's very unorigonal, but in the way you put it, it isn't at all bad. Most people concern themselves with originality to an unhealthy extent to that their stories start out very badly. Good job. you say this is revised, eh? so u must have more of it then. post, please. |
| Baseball2horse 2007-02-02 ch 1, | abuseNice little Prologe. It would be so much more interesting with the actul story. I can't wait until you update. |